I could give a little leeway, it being a first novel...but that still doesn't excuse that.
Hamilton protests that she doesn't write sex scenes unless they advance the plot, here's an example where the character development would have actually been advanced with one.
Wait...what? Has she read the last three to four books that she's written?
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Date: 2008-06-24 02:23 am (UTC)Hamilton protests that she doesn't write sex scenes unless they advance the plot, here's an example where the character development would have actually been advanced with one.
Wait...what? Has she read the last three to four books that she's written?